ASIDU 8 2018—2026 從澳門出發,陪你走向世界2018—2026 From Macao to the world, with you

PREMIUM WRITING · 申請寫作教練Application writing coaching

不是把你寫得更厲害。
是把真實的你寫清楚。
Not making you sound more impressive.
Making the real you clearer.

由個人陳述、動機信到補充短文,ASIDU 用提問、證據整理、結構回饋和修改策略,幫學生完成真正屬於自己的申請文字。From personal statements and motivation letters to short application responses, ASIDU uses questions, evidence mapping, structural feedback and revision strategy to help students complete writing that remains genuinely their own.

我們實際處理甚麼What we actually work on

由材料到成稿,
保留你的聲音。
From raw material to final draft,
keeping your voice.

01 · PROMPT

讀懂題目Understand the prompt

拆解題目真正要求、字數、評核重點和不能忽略的限制。Break down the actual request, word limit, assessment focus and non-negotiable constraints.

02 · MATERIAL

整理真實材料Map genuine material

從學習、項目、工作、選擇與反思中找出可以支持敘事的具體證據。Identify concrete evidence across study, projects, work, choices and reflection that can support the narrative.

03 · ARGUMENT

建立結構Build the structure

決定主線、段落作用、證據次序,以及課程與個人方向如何真正連起來。Define the central thread, purpose of each paragraph, evidence order and the real connection between programme and direction.

04 · REVISION

有目的地修改Revise with purpose

針對邏輯、具體程度、重複、語氣與可讀性提出回饋,再由學生完成修改。Receive feedback on logic, specificity, repetition, tone and readability, then complete the revision as the author.

一個可追蹤的修改過程A traceable revision process

四個版本節點。
每一步都知道為甚麼改。
Four revision checkpoints.
Know why every change is made.

  1. 01材料會談Evidence conversation

    找出真實經歷、選擇與反思。Surface genuine experience, choices and reflection.

  2. 02敘事大綱Narrative outline

    確認主線與段落作用。Agree the central thread and paragraph roles.

  3. 03學生草稿Student draft

    由學生以自己的語言完成內容。The student writes the content in their own words.

  4. 04回饋與誠信檢查Feedback and integrity check

    改善清晰度,核對事實與作者身份。Improve clarity and check facts and authorship.

學術與申請誠信Academic and application integrity

我們教你寫。
不替你寫。
We coach your writing.
We do not write for you.

  • 不虛構經歷、成績、獎項、研究、工作或個人困難。No fabricated experience, grades, awards, research, work or personal hardship.
  • 不代寫、冒充學生聲音或提供可直接冒認為學生原創的成稿。No ghostwriting, impersonation of the student’s voice or ready-made text to be passed off as their original work.
  • 不規避學校對人工智能、協作或申請支援的披露要求。No circumvention of a university’s disclosure rules for AI, collaboration or application support.
  • 學生核對所有事實、遵守目標院校規則,並對最終提交內容負責。The student verifies every fact, follows the target institution’s rules and owns the final submission.

由真實材料開始Start from genuine material

不是套模板。
是找出你真正要說的話。
Not a template.
Find what you genuinely need to say.

預約寫作支援初談Book a writing support talk

服務範圍與費用按文件類型、數量、截止日和目前準備程度書面確認。Scope and fee are confirmed in writing based on document type, volume, deadline and current readiness.